With that, here it is:
Ice & Fire
He said I was as cold as…
I had to be
Because his temper was as hot as…
My heart is now as hard as…
Until the next time
He loses control like a wild…
You see this calm as smooth as…
It won’t survive
My shame that burns like…
See Phil's entry here and Melissa's entry here.
3 comments:
I love it! What do you mean, not a poet? It's good! Really.
It's about as far from awful as you can get. It's really good. I love the hanging ends of the first and third lines, very well done.
Thank you both! *refrains from poet/don't know it joke*
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